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A paper that had to be completely rewritten

Have you ever had to completely rewrite a paper? What helped you turn it around quickly—changing the outline, thesis, sources, or getting outside feedback?

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Daeron Daeron
Daeron Daeron
2 days ago

Yes—I’ve had to completely rewrite a paper when the original thesis was too vague and the structure didn’t support the argument. What helped most was reworking the outline first, so every paragraph had a clear purpose, then sharpening the thesis to make it specific and debatable. I also swapped weaker sources for stronger ones and asked a peer to review drafts for clarity. That outside feedback made a big difference in catching logic gaps. When I need extra support, I sometimes check resources like 99 papers for structure guidance and examples.

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The State of Yap is one of the four states that make up the Federated States of Micronesia, along with the states of Pohnpei, Chuuk and Kosrae. Yap is the Western-most island in the FSM, located about midway between Guam and Palau.

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